Lauren Burd is a wife and mother of two, a boy age 9 and a girl age 4. Immortal is the first book of the series, and she is currently working hard on the followup. Forever [Lauren Burd, Lynn O’Dell] on *FREE* shipping on qualifying offers. “What are we playing for?” An evil grin spread over his face. “I am so. Alina believed becoming an Immortal would protect those she loved but how can she Forever. By Lauren Burd. Published by Lauren Burd at Smashwords.
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Alina, Samuel and Duncan never really worked out who was going to get the girl.
But one thing about the book urked me: Certain areas needed to be tightened up, some expanded on, some cut out, some completely rewritten, and a lot of forfver rearranged. The flrever was a lot thicker than in Immortal and there were a lot more twists and turns. Plus all the similitudes with Twilight, Evermore, Vampire diaries and a couple other titles There are so many mistakes in this book.
It felt like it dropped you in mid reading. It also would have given some depth to the relationship that might make the “I love you”s said later on in the book seem a bit more believable. She gives Duncan all the spotlight and end up telling us that Alina and Samuel were dating for two weeks?!? How to write a great review Do Say what you liked best and least Describe the author’s style Explain the rating you gave Don’t Use rude and profane language Include any personal information Mention spoilers or the book’s price Recap the plot.
This was quite possibly one of the worst books i have read in my entire life. The last thing that irked me was the ending.
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The characters needed to be more defined, and events did not laurdn appropriately, often leaving big holes and blanks What to say It’s one of the things I value most in people. However, the more I read, the more I began to see the story as it’s own. Gods, demons and vampires, I clicked buy. Nov 01, Mercedes rated it really liked it.
You basically turn the page and that’s it. Anyway, I recommended this book for brud who want to make the dreary mission to work more interesting. There are no discussion topics on this book yet. How to write a great review. I could not care less if she ended up with Samuel or Duncan.
Great work Lauren, can’t wait for the next one! It amazed me how each event unfolded, and as soon as I thought I figured something out, Burd would throw me in for a loop and catch me off guard again.
To my Husband Noah for his encouragement And constant reminders. To me, they weren’t living, breathing beings. Blood and Champagne, The Bloodlines Series. Dec 10, Megan Amaral rated it liked it. Vurd picks up where the previous book left off.
Published first published November 24th There are twists and turns, but they don’t flow quite as smoothly as they should. Happy Reading my fellow Kindle-ites and remember: Is it Even written? Want to Read saving…. Want to Read Currently Reading Read. She wakes foreveer, a vampire and suffering from amnesia, and Duncan tells her that they are in love and Samuel attacked her. This book felt like a bad rip-off of Twilight and Vampire Diaries.
So yeah, first of all I could not complete this book. Truly I won’t describe this book because up until the last quarter of the book I thought I was reading Twilight.
Shouldn’t she want to tell her right away that he’s been flirting with her too. She both works and attends school full time while writing every spare moment she has. Don’t get me wrong, I’m glad that Aliana is set straight right away, but it’s a little disappointing that I stressed about it for over a year, and it was over so quick.
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The cover was… startling, and because so, I found myself clicking on it for additional details. I like both, enjoy both, but always will Cadbury’s be dear to my heart though Hershey’s is as good in its own right now can you guess which Immortal is? The last thing she remembers is getting on the plane to come to Florida for college.
I am so anticipating book number two. The beginning was really disappointing at first. She’s there for 2 seconds in the book and she doesn’t bring anything to the storyline. I loved how the author wrote in a chapter and named it “rejected” of the one night that Alina and Duncan explore Raul’s mansion after not being able to sleep. You submitted the following rating and review. Funny how many will complain about a book starting out too slow, and here I am saying this one started out too rushed.
Amazon Second Chance Pass it on, trade it in, give it a second life. It is more of a cliff-note for the audience.
He then gives her the background on both himself and Samuel, thereby also revealing Samuel’s secret. However it was still a good story. Readers Benefits of registering Where are my ebooks?